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Hard-Ball Critique Their Presentations
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Siru, Kerrin William, Avon, Kimberly (HR), Kevin, Tony, Vivi, Betty, Santa
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Posture / eye contact / voice / tone / choice or words
Introduction - Introduced themself?
Opening - Hook? Question? Problem? Agenda? TImeframe? Rules.
Core - Clear? Interesting? Grammar. Visuals, animations.
Conclusion - Do we feel energized/inspired?
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12:30 🧑🏼🤝🧑🏻 Share your day with a partner.
12:35 📊 Team A Presents, Team B asks questions
- Provide as detailed feedback as possible as if CEO.
1:30 🌐 Go over presentation content + timed workshops
- (Me silent) team practice/competitions/timed designs
🌎 Vocabulary:
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
Vivi and William
📝 Action Items
Try to sleep
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 Vivi Slept :) zzz
Good opening fact about 33% of life is sleep
Good volume
Good opening question "how do you sleep?"
Interesting statistics on men vs women
Looked at your notes a bit too much
Could have shown the positions again
Good relatable topic
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🔥 William's New Year
Good timing on the topic
Thanks for including the date
Thanks for teaching some Chinese "Nian", as well as the traditions. Now I understand!
Good use of a story and images
Good volume
Also looked a lot at notes
Very encouraging after conclusion slide
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🌎 Vocabulary:
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
T
📝 Action Items
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 Plural Nouns
W
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🔥 Descriptions
W
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🏆 Completed
Siru & Tony
📝 Action Items
Vivi & William
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 Siru's Disney Princesses
Thanks for the personal info on the intro slide, including the date
Good job with the opening question "Do you remember when I talked about lanterns?" Tangled is a princess.
Nice flow of princesses from 1st to last
Including the stories
Solid pronunciation
Could have connected the zodiac signs or something else to the audience. Maybe ask some more questions for interaction.
The simple layout of slides
Decent Conclusion
🔥 Tony's Path Dependency
Good tease on the serious topic (Your hook)
Thanks for asking the audience questions
A little quick, but we learned something
🌎 Vocabulary:
Citations & References
引文和參考文獻
Persuade 說服
Coordinate your portion
Plan your part
Irrelevant 無關緊要的
按時間順序排列
Chronological
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
Kerrin & Santa
📝 Action Items
Tony & Siru
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 Santa's Mountain Hike
Good positioning
Beautifully animated title slide with your info
Clear agenda
Could have used a 3D map to show elevation
Good use of past issues toward the conclusion
Nice and personalized
Kinda skipped over some images, but okay
Solid conclusion safety
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🔥 Kerrin's Pet Insurance
Good positioning and agenda
Very adorable photos
Clear slides and infographics
Thanks for statistical trends + Questioning
Good sales argument
Solid conclusion about pricing
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🌎 Vocabulary:
Stubborn 倔強
Saturated 飽和的
Tangled 糾結
Mystery (A secret we don't know)
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
Betty & Avon
📝 Action Items
Kerrin & Santa
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 Betty's Language of Flowers
Beautiful Slides
A little louder
Good positioning, but a little still
Relied heavily on notes
Useful information based on situations
A little hard to read white roses
Beautiful font
🔥 Avon's Bubble Tea
Thanks for introducing yourself and why you chose your topic with a date
Good positioning and eye contact
Good intonation and hand gestures
Good on touching the board to point
Great research with links & visuals
Sharp transition to your Conclusion
- Wasn't really sure when it ended
Excellent come back to your intro
Excellent transition to the board
Confident
🌎 Vocabulary:
Infographic 信息圖
Timelapse 延時攝影
Rooster 🐓
Be Familiar = To know
Venue 場地
Contingency = Backup
Structure 結構 Outline
Appropriate 合適的
Spoiled Milk 爛
Spoiled Child =
Kid gets everything
So, bad attitude
🙊 Pronunciation:
Visit many Attractions
A bio-diverse (adj) area,
It has Biodiversity (n)
Lake "L-eh-k"
Souvenir "Soo-ven-ear"
Knife "N-eye-f"
Tour "Two-er" | Tower
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🏆 Completed
T
📝 Action Items
Avon <3 Betty
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⌚ Lesson Time:
T
🔎 Comments:
🐾 William's Kinmen Islands
Good job introducing yourself and your topic via a question and generic photo
Good positioning near the slide, as well as volume and pronunciation. A fair balance between eyes on notes, slides, & us
Nice use of the map (thank you)
Very beautiful and useful infographics
I appreciate that you had some history
Solid transportation research
Good on "For Example" - Perfect Website
Thank you for finally saying "photos"
- Photos, Attractions, Meters, styles...
Good use of a video
Various topics such as food, wine, tides...
Clear call to action with a suggested timeline
Maybe a picture for the conclusion slide
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🔥 Vivi's 2022 Chinese Zodiac Horoscope
Good positioning and volume
Nice introduction "Has anyone asked you?"
Nice layout, it's so cute + simple white balance
Clear cut animations on autoplay while you talk without being distracting
Could have asked who is which animal, and then review our animals
- You could have asked for our birthdays in advance via LINE (optionally)
You can react to your slides (Horse)
Good resources slide
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🌎 Vocabulary:
Submarine
Sarcasm
Sunroof
Rebirth = Reborn
Marketing/Commercial
Doppelganger = Copy
🙊 Pronunciation:
Milk "Mail-k"
Attraction
"Ah-track-tion"
Spicy "Sp-eye-see"
🐾 Betty's Hot Spring
Thank you for fixing the curtain animation
Let us answer
Move and turn to the audience
Move around more
Good pace
Could be a little louder
A good idea of "what to know before going"
Do not GO to the hot spring "future"
Quite some beautiful slides
I like the transportation slides
Maybe a map?
🔥 Siru's Cute Animations
Good intro question.
I like the surprise "It's all wrong"
Good turning to the audience
_Sooooo cuuuuuute animations =^.^+
Good white balance
Accurate number pronunciation
Deep information
🏆 Completed
Betty & Siru
📝 Action Items
William & Vivi
🌎 Vocabulary:
The Track is not so Wide
Context 語境
Bilingual 雙語
Trilingual 三語
Bet 賭注
Infographic 信息圖
🙊 Pronunciation:
Bright (lots of light)
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📝 Action Items
Japanese Presentations
🐾 Avon's Crazy Tree Millimeters
Thanks for putting your name & date
Maybe separate ur agenda from ur intro slide
Good use of your own photo (Maybe rotate)
Professional use of a link
Forest area coverage could have a visual map
Thanks for the map later
6,630,000 = 6 million, 6 hundred 30 thousand
Change mms to ms
Good job avoiding your notes (also Tony)
Nice pictures, could show the bird though
A different kind of conclusion/review slide
🔥 Tony's Restroom Culture
Good history introduction on why you chose the topic, (also good job Avon).
You're funny
Sudden, but Cute conclusion slide
You spoke at a good, relaxed pace
💦 Japan vs America
Japan focuses on the big vision/goal/picture
America focuses on "why do it/benefits"
Words: I like this
Context: I’m holding a book= I like this book (but I don’t say book)
🌎 Vocabulary:
Taboo 忌諱
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
T
📝 Action Items
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⌚ Lesson Time:
Referendums
Santa
Kerrin
🔎 Comments:
All students present
🐾 Santa's Smart Watches
A little more practice with Plurals
Strong confidence standing up
Clean open slide
Clean outline
Good use/command of the laser
Clear questions "What is a heart rate?"
Thanks to our audience for interacting
You spoke at a perfect pace/speed (Clear)
Good use of your own words on the fly
Smooth conclusion
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🔥 Kerrin's FOMO Houses
Thank you for slowing down
Good volume
When you asked "What happened", you didn't wait long enough for us to guess
Good history, despite a busy wordy slide
Good movement and posture
Very clear about how COVID affects work
Impressive vocabulary
The graphs are very, very clear
Very well thought out answers
- Excellent sentence structure
Very educative conclusion with reasoning
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🌎 Vocabulary:
🙊 Pronunciation:
C
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🏆 Completed
T
📝 Action Items
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⌚ Lesson Time:
Greetings
William's PPT
Slang PPT
🐾 William's Touching Fatherly Love
Gorgeous PowerPoint
Solid outline
Thank you for the history
Stand by the front next time
Your paper is shaking, what can you do?
Use your iPad or dance
Very touching story
251 or 257? (My mistake)
Good question "Do you know triathlons?"
Could show a picture after.
Touching video
Good conclusion slide
Powerful message
🔥 Descriptions
W
💦 Word Choices
M
🎾 Action Verbs
I
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
T
⭐ Focus
W
🌎 Vocabulary:
方法 Approach (v)
靈感 Inspiration (n)
編織 Weave / Add / Mix
熱情 Enthusiasm
從事 Engage/Include
🙊 Pronunciation:
Thank you for rehersing
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🏆 Completed
Santa, Siru, Tony, Vivi
📝 Action Items
Remember Your Plurals
- William --> Slang +
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⌚ Lesson Time:
Meet & Greet
Presentations
20 Presentation Tips
🔎 Comments:
Kevin was missing
🐾 Santa's Pet Trade
Great Entry
Beautiful slide layouts (Simple)
Good Outline / Agenda
Excellent Audience International Questions
Great concise history of why (supply/demand)
Try to use plurals: animals, cats, dogs
How do we do it/this/that?
What's your benefit to adopting?
- Less stray animals
- You can feel good about yourself
- Save money
What about concerns? Cute animals
🍰 Siru's Bakery
Good introduction (I like the date)
Great questions (Allow the audience to relate)
Good try on the tools (I think you practiced)
Lots of bullet points
- However, you did say there's a lot, so... good
Good call to action, with a benefit
- wow you actually promoted yourself
Quite personalized
- I like that you said it's not too hard, try it!
Sudden ending
- I like that you ended with your info
Why not have a map?
Why not show the link?
⭐ Focus
Try to remember your plurals
🔥 Tony's Hot Pot
Try to include your name on the 1st slide.
Good on saying why you chose the topic
How hot? Spicy or temperature?
Thanks for the history lesson
- included benefits of hotpot (games & girls)
Good effort looking away from notes
"Spicy broth" could of had a shadow
Great humor "I am a girl"
- Funny photos
- Funny phrases "Burn, baby, burn"
Good body movement and openness
Good try on animations & GIFs
Great benefit for the skin (explains the girls)
- Strengthen relationships
- Great invitation, really
Map is from viewers' perspective
Please add name, date & the topic at the end
🍁 Vivi's Maple Leaves
Choosing a topic the teacher likes = 100%
I like the falling leaves = smooth in person
- online viewers may see them jump
Nice pictures and layouts
- Nice virgin waterfall - no picture??
Love the 2 bullet points
- Repeated dates: "guess which months"
Plurals: 3,000 trees, both sides, falling leaves
"tree-s", "sigh-d-s", "lee-v-s"
Thanks for the viewing times
- maybe a map of Taiwan would help
I love your gantt chart
Maybe hold notes with one hand
- might help to open up your body language
Could asked, "Have you been here?"
🌎 Vocabulary:
A Hook
An interesting intro
"Have u gotten lost b4"
Cheese 🧀 起司
Pollution 污染
影響 Influence
Call to Action
Invite Audience to Try it
Barrier 障礙 Obstacle
FOMO
Fear of Missing Out
Over style = Too much
Too much style 風格
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🏆 Completed
4 Powerpoints
📝 Action Items
Santa, Siru, Tony, Vivi, William
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⌚ Lesson Time:
Presentations
Design Practice
🗺️ Avon's Hiking App
Try for a hook question for your intro
- Problem --> Solution = App
- Good job introducing your name Avon
The video transition could be smoother
- Explain the video a little first
- Provide the link?
Breathe deeper to talk smoother
- Felt very fast
- Great during questions
Good eye contact
Good answers
- Maybe offer to show her how to download it
How about a call to action to install after?
- A call to action = the audience installs it
Maybe include a comparison to Google Maps
- Try a little more in-depth on features
👩🍳 Betty's Cooking
Good introduction (Name & Good Afternoon)
Stood very still --> Move next time (please)
A lot of brown in the design = flat
- Too much brown (Brown text on brown)
The layout felt flat (design)
- Pictures were too many & too small
- The perfect slide was better
- Use bigger pictures
Did you ask a question at one point?
- Maybe ask the audience if they cook
- Include the audience (do they like cheese)?
Maybe invite them to try cooking it
🐭 Kerrin's Disney+
Good Agenda
Asked an intro question
Good use of graphics (timeline/layout)
Felt like a story
Please turn more to your audience
Maybe show a big picture of Disneyland
Have you heard of 20th Century or Marvel?
- They all belong to Disney. Wow!
Have you guys watched any of these movies?
Good selling point (45 days after-theatre)
Beautiful Conclusion slide
- Excellent call to action to sell Disney +
- Price included
- 4 People can watch
Great comparison on Netflix vs Disney
- Maybe include that in your presentation
🏮 Kevin's Lanterns
Many Sky Lanterns
Try to include questions (last time u saw 1)
How did you get there? -> Train or Bus
Please Practice/Rehearse more if you can
- to talk smoother
- to look at the audience
I like that you included some history
Needed to divide the 1st slide into more slides
Very beautiful photo of the train
The conclusion was too sudden/fast
- Invite everyone, when is it/where?
Mention possible risks
🌎 Vocabulary:
Conversation Starter (n)
An interesting object
Side Hustle 🐼
A 2nd Business
Flight ✈️ 航班
Take Turns
You speak, I speak
You go, I go
Rapport 關係 Bonding
Build Friendship
Afraid of Heights
Afraid to fall down
🙊 Pronunciation:
Bedding 🛌
January
"Jan-you-air-ee"
🐾 Plural Nouns
Some CLOTHES
I would like to buy running SHOES
There are 4 TYPES of night MARKETS
He won all the MEDALS
Between 2 BROTHERS
🚴♀️ Timed Tenses
I have already BOUGHT something ✔️
Have you ever GOTTEN a blister
It BECAME a hit (In the past)
⭐ Checkpoint
Start on Slide 34 Next Week
🔎 Comments:
Talk smoothly.
Conclusion Slide.
🔥 Descriptions
From GERMANY (the country)
GERMANS are the people (No y)
💦 Word Choices
We're in THE office
🎾 Action Verbs
I
📝 Action Items
Kevin, Karen,
Avon, Betty
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⌚ Lesson Time:
Catchup
Presentations
Europe Travels
Small Talk PPT
Situation 2