📊 PTTC Presents

Hard-Ball Critique Their Presentations

Clockwise
Siru, Kerrin William, Avon, Kimberly (HR), Kevin, Tony, Vivi, Betty, Santa

santa@pttc.com.tw, william_wen@pttc.com.tw, vivi@pttc.com.tw, kevin@pttc.com.tw, betty@pttc.com.tw, tony@pttc.com.tw, avon@pttc.com.tw, kimberly@pttc.com.tw, siru@pttc.com.tw, charles_tsai@pttc.com.tw

Posture / eye contact / voice / tone / choice or words

Introduction - Introduced themself? 
Opening - Hook? Question? Problem? Agenda? TImeframe? Rules.

Core - Clear? Interesting? Grammar. Visuals, animations. 
Conclusion - Do we feel energized/inspired?

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12:35 📊 Team A Presents, Team B asks questions

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  1:30 🌐 Go over presentation content + timed workshops
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Presentation

🏦 Presentations - 2/10

🌎 Vocabulary:

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. Vivi and William

📝 Action Items

  1. Try to sleep

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

  •  

🐾 Vivi Slept :) zzz

  1. Good opening fact about 33% of life is sleep

  2. Good volume

  3. Good opening question "how do you sleep?"

  4. Interesting statistics on men vs women

  5. Looked at your notes a bit too much

  6. Could have shown the positions again

  7. Good relatable topic

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🔥 William's New Year

  1. Good timing on the topic

  2. Thanks for including the date

  3. Thanks for teaching some Chinese "Nian", as well as the traditions. Now I understand!

  4. Good use of a story and images

  5. Good volume

  6. Also looked a lot at notes

  7. Very encouraging after conclusion slide

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

🏦 Presentations - X

🌎 Vocabulary:

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. T

📝 Action Items

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

  •  

🐾 Plural Noun​s 

  1. W

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🔥 Descriptions

  1. W

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

☠️ Becareful of the deadly 's' at the end - 1/27 

🏆 Completed

  1. Siru & Tony

📝 Action Items

  1. Vivi & William

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

  • Focus on Plurals

     

🐾 Siru's Disney Princesses 

  1. Thanks for the personal info on the intro slide, including the date

  2. Good job with the opening question "Do you remember when I talked about lanterns?" Tangled is a princess.

  3. Nice flow of princesses from 1st to last
    Including the stories

  4. Solid pronunciation

  5. Could have connected the zodiac signs or something else to the audience. Maybe ask some more questions for interaction.

  6. The simple layout of slides

  7. Decent Conclusion

🔥 Tony's Path Dependency

  1. Good tease on the serious topic (Your hook)

  2. Thanks for asking the audience questions

  3. A little quick, but we learned something

🏦 Presentations - 1/20

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Citations & References
    引文和參考文獻

  2. Persuade 說服

  3. Coordinate your portion
    Plan your part

  4. Irrelevant 無關緊要的

  5. 按時間順序排列
    Chronological

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. Kerrin & Santa

📝 Action Items

  1. Tony & Siru

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

  •  

🐾 Santa's Mountain Hike

  1. Good positioning

  2. Beautifully animated title slide with your info

  3. Clear agenda

  4. Could have used a 3D map to show elevation

  5. Good use of past issues toward the conclusion

  6. Nice and personalized

  7. Kinda skipped over some images, but okay

  8. Solid conclusion safety

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🔥 Kerrin's Pet Insurance

  1. Good positioning and agenda

  2. Very adorable photos

  3. Clear slides and infographics

  4. Thanks for statistical trends + Questioning

  5. Good sales argument

  6. Solid conclusion about pricing

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

🏦 Presentations - 1/13

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Stubborn 倔強

  2. Saturated 飽和的

  3. Tangled 糾結

  4. Mystery (A secret we don't know)

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. Betty & Avon 

📝 Action Items

  1. Kerrin & Santa

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

  •  

🐾 Betty's Language of Flowers

  1. Beautiful Slides

  2. A little louder

  3. Good positioning, but a little still

  4. Relied heavily on notes

  5. Useful information based on situations

  6. A little hard to read white roses 

  7. ​Beautiful font​

🔥 Avon's Bubble Tea

  1. Thanks for introducing yourself and why you chose your topic with a date

  2. Good positioning and eye contact

  3. Good intonation and hand gestures

  4. Good on touching the board to point

  5. Great research with links & visuals

  6. Sharp transition to your Conclusion
    - Wasn't really sure when it ended

  7. Excellent come back to your intro

  8. Excellent transition to the board

  9. Confident

🏦 Presentations - 1/6

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Infographic 信息圖 

  2. Timelapse 延時攝影

  3. Rooster 🐓 

  4. Be Familiar = To know

  5. Venue 場地

  6. Contingency = Backup

  7. Structure 結構 Outline

  8. Appropriate 合適的

  9. Spoiled Milk 爛
    Spoiled Child = 
    Kid gets everything
    So, bad attitude

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. Visit many Attractions

  2. A bio-diverse (adj) area,
    It has Biodiversity (n)

  3. Lake "L-eh-k"

  4. Souvenir "Soo-ven-ear"

  5. Knife "N-eye-f"

  6. Tour "Two-er" | Tower

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🏆 Completed

  1. T

📝 Action Items

  1. Avon <3 Betty

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. T

🔎 Comments:

🐾 William's Kinmen Islands

  1. Good job introducing yourself and your topic via a question and generic photo

  2. Good positioning near the slide, as well as volume and pronunciation. A fair balance between eyes on notes, slides, & us

  3. Nice use of the map (thank you)

  4. Very beautiful and useful infographics

  5. I appreciate that you had some history 

  6. Solid transportation research

  7. Good on "For Example" - Perfect Website

  8. Thank you for finally saying "photos"
     - Photos, Attractions, Meters, styles...

  9. Good use of a video

  10. Various topics such as food, wine, tides...

  11. Clear call to action with a suggested timeline

  12. Maybe a picture for the conclusion slide

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🔥 Vivi's 2022 Chinese Zodiac Horoscope

  1. Good positioning and volume

  2. Nice introduction "Has anyone asked you?"

  3. Nice layout, it's so cute + simple white balance 

  4. Clear cut animations on autoplay while you talk without being distracting

  5. Could have asked who is which animal, and then review our animals
    - You could have asked for our birthdays in advance via LINE (optionally)

  6. You can react to your slides (Horse)

  7. Good resources slide

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

🏦 Presentations - 12/30

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Submarine 

  2. Sarcasm

  3. Sunroof

  4. Rebirth = Reborn

  5. Marketing/Commercial

  6. Doppelganger = Copy

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. Milk "Mail-k"

  2. Attraction
    "Ah-track-tion"

  3. Spicy "Sp-eye-see"

🐾 Betty's Hot Spring

  1. Thank you for fixing the curtain animation

  2. Let us answer

  3. Move and turn to the audience

    1. Move around more​

  4. Good pace

    1. Could be a little louder​

  5. A good idea of "what to know before going"

  6. Do not GO to the hot spring "future"

  7. Quite some beautiful slides

  8. I like the transportation slides

    1. Maybe a map?​

🔥 Siru's Cute Animations

  1. Good intro question.

  2. I like the surprise "It's all wrong"

  3. Good turning to the audience

  4. _Sooooo cuuuuuute animations =^.^+

  5. Good white balance

  6. Accurate number pronunciation

  7. Deep information

🏆 Completed

  1. Betty & Siru

📝 Action Items

  1. William & Vivi

🏦 Presentations - 12/23

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. The Track is not so Wide

  2. Context 語境

  3. Bilingual 雙語
    Trilingual 三語

  4. Bet 賭注

  5. Infographic 信息圖

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. Bright (lots of light)

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📝 Action Items

  1. Japanese Presentations

🐾 Avon's Crazy Tree Millimeters

  1. Thanks for putting your name & date

  2. Maybe separate ur agenda from ur intro slide

  3. Good use of your own photo (Maybe rotate)

  4. Professional use of a link

  5. Forest area coverage could have a visual map

    1. Thanks for the map later​

  6. 6,630,000 = 6 million, 6 hundred 30 thousand

  7. Change mms to ms

  8. Good job avoiding your notes (also Tony)

  9. Nice pictures, could show the bird though

  10. A different kind of conclusion/review slide

🔥 Tony's Restroom Culture

  1. Good history introduction on why you chose the topic, (also good job Avon).

  2. You're funny

  3. Sudden, but Cute conclusion slide

  4. You spoke at a good, relaxed pace

​💦 Japan vs America

  1. Japan focuses on the big vision/goal/picture

  2. America focuses on "why do it/benefits"

Words: I like this
Context: I’m holding a book= I like this book (but I don’t say book)

🏦 Presentations - 12/16

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Taboo 忌諱

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. T

📝 Action Items

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. Referendums

  2. Santa

  3. Kerrin

🔎 Comments:

  • All students present

🐾 Santa's Smart Watches

  1. A little more practice with Plurals

  2. Strong confidence standing up

  3. Clean open slide

  4. Clean outline

  5. Good use/command of the laser

  6. Clear questions "What is a heart rate?"

  7. Thanks to our audience for interacting 

  8. You spoke at a perfect pace/speed (Clear)

  9. Good use of your own words on the fly

  10. Smooth conclusion

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🔥 Kerrin's FOMO Houses

  1. Thank you for slowing down

  2. Good volume

  3. When you asked "What happened", you didn't wait long enough for us to guess

  4. Good history, despite a busy wordy slide

  5. Good movement and posture

  6. Very clear about how COVID affects work

  7. Impressive vocabulary

  8. The graphs are very, very clear

  9. Very well thought out answers
    - Excellent sentence structure

  10. Very educative conclusion with reasoning

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

👨‍👦 Slang & Fatherly Love - 12/2 

🌎 Vocabulary:

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. C

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🏆 Completed

  1. T

📝 Action Items

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. Greetings

  2. William's PPT

  3. Slang PPT

🐾 William's Touching Fatherly Love

  1. Gorgeous PowerPoint

  2. Solid outline

  3. Thank you for the history

  4. Stand by the front next time

  5. Your paper is shaking, what can you do?

    1. Use your iPad or dance​

  6. Very touching story

  7. 251 or 257? (My mistake)

  8. Good question "Do you know triathlons?" 

    1. Could show a picture after.​

  9. Touching video

  10. Good conclusion slide

  11. Powerful message

🔥 Descriptions

  1. W

​💦 Word Choices

  1. M

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. T

⭐ Focus

  1. W

🏦 Presentations & Plurals - 11/25

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. 方法 Approach (v) 

  2. 靈感 Inspiration (n)

  3. 編織 Weave / Add / Mix

  4. 熱情 Enthusiasm

  5. 從事 Engage/Include

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. Thank you for rehersing

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🏆 Completed

  1. Santa, Siru, Tony, Vivi

📝 Action Items

  1. Remember Your Plurals
    - William --> Slang +

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. Meet & Greet

  2. Presentations

  3. 20 Presentation Tips

🔎 Comments:

  • Kevin was missing

🐾 Santa's Pet Trade

  1. Great Entry

  2. Beautiful slide layouts (Simple)

  3. Good Outline / Agenda

  4. Excellent Audience International Questions

  5. Great concise history of why (supply/demand)

  6. Try to use plurals: animals, cats, dogs

  7. How do we do it/this/that?

  8. What's your benefit to adopting?
    - Less stray animals
    - You can feel good about yourself
    - Save money

  9. What about concerns? Cute animals

🍰 Siru's Bakery 

  1. Good introduction (I like the date)

  2. Great questions (Allow the audience to relate)

  3. Good try on the tools (I think you practiced)

  4. Lots of bullet points
    - However, you did say there's a lot, so... good

  5. Good call to action, with a benefit
    - wow you actually promoted yourself

  6. Quite personalized
    - I like that you said it's not too hard, try it!

  7. Sudden ending​​
    - I like that you ended with your info

  8. Why not have a map?

  9. Why not show the link?

⭐ Focus

  1. Try to remember your plurals

🔥 Tony's Hot Pot

  1. Try to include your name on the 1st slide.

  2. Good on saying why you chose the topic

  3. How hot? Spicy or temperature?

  4. Thanks for the history lesson
    - included benefits of hotpot (games & girls)

  5. Good effort looking away from notes

  6. "Spicy broth" could of had a shadow

  7. Great humor "I am a girl"
    - Funny photos
    - Funny phrases "Burn, baby, burn"

  8. Good body movement and openness

  9. Good try on animations & GIFs

  10. Great benefit for the skin (explains the girls)
    - Strengthen relationships
    - Great invitation, really

  11. Map is from viewers' perspective

  12. Please add name, date & the topic at the end

🍁 Vivi's Maple Leaves

  1. Choosing a topic the teacher likes = 100%

  2. I like the falling leaves = smooth in person
    - online viewers may see them jump

  3. Nice pictures and layouts
    - Nice virgin waterfall - no picture??

  4. Love the 2 bullet points
    - Repeated dates: "guess which months"

  5. Plurals: 3,000 trees, both sides, falling leaves
    "tree-s", "sigh-d-s", "lee-v-s"

  6. Thanks for the viewing times
    - maybe a map of Taiwan would help

  7. I love your gantt chart

  8. Maybe hold notes with one hand
    - might help to open up your body language 

  9. Could asked, "Have you been here?"

🗣️ Call to Action & FOMO 害怕錯過什麼 - 11/18 

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. A Hook
    An interesting intro
    "Have u gotten lost b4"

  2. Cheese 🧀 起司 

  3. Pollution 污染

  4. 影響 Influence 

  5. Call to Action
    Invite Audience to Try it

  6. Barrier 障礙 Obstacle 

  7. FOMO
    Fear of Missing Out

  8. Over style = Too much
    Too much style 風格

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🏆 Completed

  1. 4 Powerpoints

📝 Action Items

  1. Santa, Siru, Tony, Vivi, William

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. Presentations

  2. Design Practice

🗺️ Avon's Hiking App

  1. Try for a hook question for your intro
    - Problem --> Solution = App
    - Good job introducing your name Avon

  2. The video transition could be smoother
    - Explain the video a little first
    - Provide the link?

  3. Breathe deeper to talk smoother
    Felt very fast​
    - Great during questions

  4. Good eye contact

  5. Good answers
    - Maybe offer to show her how to download it

  6. How about a call to action to install after?
    - A call to action = the audience installs it

  7. Maybe include a comparison to Google Maps 
    - Try a little more in-depth on features

👩‍🍳 Betty's Cooking

  1. Good introduction (Name & Good Afternoon)

  2. Stood very still --> Move next time (please)

  3. A lot of brown in the design = flat
    - Too much brown (Brown text on brown)

  4. The layout felt flat (design)
    - Pictures were too many & too small
    - The perfect slide was better
    - Use bigger pictures

  5. Did you ask a question at one point?
    - Maybe ask the audience if they cook
    - Include the audience (do they like cheese)?

  6. Maybe invite them to try cooking it

🐭 Kerrin's Disney+

  1. Good Agenda

  2. Asked an intro question 

  3. Good use of graphics (timeline/layout)

  4. Felt like a story

  5. Please turn more to your audience

  6. Maybe show a big picture of Disneyland

  7. Have you heard of 20th Century or Marvel?
    - They all belong to Disney. Wow!

  8. Have you guys watched any of these movies?

  9. Good selling point (45 days after-theatre)

  10. Beautiful Conclusion slide
    - Excellent call to action to sell Disney +
    - Price included
    - 4 People can watch

  11. Great comparison on Netflix vs Disney
    - Maybe include that in your presentation

​🏮 Kevin's Lanterns

  1. Many Sky Lanterns 

  2. Try to include questions (last time u saw 1)
    How did you get there? -> Train or Bus

  3. Please Practice/Rehearse more if you can
    - to talk smoother
    - to look at the audience

  4. I like that you included some history

  5. Needed to divide the 1st slide into more slides 

  6. Very beautiful photo of the train

  7. The conclusion was too sudden/fast
    - Invite everyone, when is it/where?

  8. Mention possible risks

👢 We Wear Shoes to the Night Market - 11/11 

🌎 Vocabulary:

  1. Conversation Starter (n)
    An interesting object

  2. Side Hustle 🐼 
    A 2nd Business

  3. Flight ✈️ 航班 

  4. Take Turns
    You speak, I speak
    You go, I go

  5. Rapport 關係 Bonding
    Build Friendship

  6. Afraid of Heights
    Afraid to fall down

🙊 Pronunciation:

  1. Bedding 🛌 

  2. January
    "Jan-you-air-ee"

🐾 Plural Noun​s 

  1. Some CLOTHES

  2. I would like to buy running SHOES

  3. There are 4 TYPES of night MARKETS

  4. He won all the MEDALS

  5. Between 2 BROTHERS

🚴‍♀️ Timed Tenses

  1. I have already BOUGHT something ✔️ 

  2. Have you ever GOTTEN a blister

  3. It BECAME a hit (In the past)

⭐ Checkpoint

  1. Start on Slide 34 Next Week

🔎 Comments:

  • Talk smoothly.

  • Conclusion Slide.

🔥 Descriptions

  1. From GERMANY (the country)
    GERMANS are the people (No y)

​💦 Word Choices

  1. We're in THE office

🎾 Action Verbs​​

  1. I

📝 Action Items

  1. Kevin, Karen,
    Avon, Betty

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⌚ Lesson Time:

  1. Catchup

  2. Presentations

  3. Europe Travels

  4. Small Talk PPT

    1. Situation 2​